THE BURNING DESIRE

Tuesday, December 25, 2007

...it was one of those innocuous moments in life when one wakes up in state of disbelief oblivious of beauty which unfolds in its transient presence.

One fine morning, I found myself standing just on the edge of a flowing river, a river which was tempting and oozing with cornucopia of love, her scintillating beauty splashing on her crystal clear ambrosia.

Standing close to the river I can only admire her beauty, I started walking along the bank to grasp every drop of her beauty. The two captivating green eyes from the depth of river started following my inner soul, captivating my burning desires.

As I walked along her, I felt the sensation of her curves meandering through rocky and terrain surface in her full bloom. Her supple arms opened up, a deep urge from inside urged me to quench my thirst from her ambrosia of love.

It was difficult choice for me to whether just walk along the bank grasping her surface beauty or should take a deep plunge for her womb. Suddenly, a whiff of fresh air brought the tiny droplets of her which touched my carnal desires ...

I saw her unblemished bosom opening up like an oyster with a milky pearl lying inside it, radiant and throbbing with life. Captivated, I sat there dangling my feets touching her, a tinkling sensation invited me to have a bathe in her pristine beauty...

Got one step closer, I spread up my arms, closed my eyes and took a final plunge in a world of uncertainties, I was there inside her, feeling every single droplets of her absorbing me into her. My own self got reflected in her serene and calm nature which soothed my soul. My animal instincts started battling with her, but she undeterred holded herself as I crossed all the barriers, her green eyes lit with wild desires and in a moment it vanished. Now, I was there into her thrusting, crushing and battling... I slipped into her nectar, sipping the burning sensation ...

Immersed in her tranquillising beauty, 'I' vanished, it was a moment of timelessness...and I went deep and deep to search me...

6 Comments:

Blogger D said...

good 1, I already told you what I got to say...

3:04 AM  
Blogger Purva said...

i am not sure i understand the depth of your words but you have put them beautifully!

Keep blogging

Happy living!

3:07 AM  
Blogger Biswa Yonzon said...

Sensuous, Scintillating and a savouring piece of work. The imagery of the burning desire is made visible by the use of ‘ambrosia’ and ‘cornucopia’, two words also bring in the element of the mythical. Careful interplay of a sexy seductress and the river, of wholesome food (cornucopis) with liquor (ambrosia), of losing oneself ‘I’ to the moment, of sexual intercourse and swimming.
aham!

4:00 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

this one i like the most...u are really a good writer, putting a word in two different meaning ....u made me think, amazed , and like u more...you put your words in a sexy manner without compromising its decency.u will capture the heart of a reader as u have captured mine.i can feel your deeper desire, a really burning one...AM...

10:53 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i wish i was the river !!!!!!!!

2:07 AM  
Blogger aparajita said...

This reminds me of the animation in Pink Floyd…how maddening was the interaction in those flowers…so very sensual. Flowers forever taken as symbol of innocence, how wildly broke the entire notion of being still and battled and plunged overflowing with energy.

And I couldn’t either imagine a river too being so sensual. Its wonderfully narrated and intelligently touched. True that…erotica is tickling with a feather and pornography is the whole damn chicken :)

3:20 AM  

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